If the River Were a Man
This poem is written, loosely, in the form of a pantoum. I am experimenting with this form because I find it very evocative of the language of magic; of spells and incantations. And since I am working on some new magic (she says slyly), well… it always pays to practice.
if the river were a man tonight
outside my window
I would promise to love him
as if he would always be here
outside my window
like he is tonight
as if he would always be here
unhurried and brushed smooth
by the borrowed light of a complicated moon
like he is tonight
silent with the sorrows of his constant freedom
unhurried and brushed smooth
by the borrowed light of a complicated moon
like a snake in the grass, slipping always away
silent with the sorrows of his constant freedom
I would promise to love him
like a snake in the grass, slipping always away
if the river were a man tonight

Lovely!
Reciprocal,
Thank you… and welcome! Nice name, by the way
What a beautiful poem, carefuly entwined imagery. It’s so rare to find someone who recognises the connection between poetry, incantation and magic. In fact I think you and me make two, I wish I knew more. This has wonderful sounds and would be beautiful read aloud as a conjuration.
Paul,
I’m of the same mind about your poetry as you seem to be about mine. It seems your equation might just be true!